Wednesday, July 23, 2014

In Conclusion, --

Source: photo taken by the author.
Raise your hand if you hate to write conclusions. If you’re sitting in a room somewhere raising your hand right now, then you’re just like me. My first (awful) instinct is usually to write “In conclusion,” followed by a restatement of my introductory paragraph. This may be the worst conclusion in the history of conclusions, so I must always fight my instinct to end that way.

The conclusion is a critical paragraph in your paper. That’s because it creates the final impression that a reader takes away from your essay. Your first nine paragraphs could be stellar, but if your tenth and final paragraph is tepid or repetitive or unsatisfactory in some other regard, it ruins the good will you’ve earned from the reader up to that point.

So if “In conclusion,” followed by a regurgitation of your introduction is a horrible conclusion (trust me, it is), then how can you craft a better way to wrap up your essay? There are a myriad of methods. Here are just a few examples:

1. End with a memorable quotation. Find that perfect quotation that puts a strong punctuation mark on your essay. By the same token, you could end with a few lines of memorable dialogue.

2. Issue a call for action. Many college papers identify a problem and perhaps offer a possible solution(s). End with a “call for action” to solve the problem you’re identified.

3. Make a prediction. Some essays are speculative. Perhaps your conclusion can look forward into the future.

4. Come full circle. If executed poorly, this type of ending can come dangerously close to the horrible “restate your introduction” conclusion. However, if you began with a narrative or anecdotal introduction, then returning the reader to the scene of that original anecdote in your conclusion adds power to your writing. “Coming full circle” is just a brief reminder, however, not a complete restatement of the original anecdote.

There are many other types of conclusions, but what more can I say? In conclusion, I’m done!

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